Metaphor
–noun
1.
a figure of speech in which a term or phrase is applied to something to which it is not literally applicable in order to suggest a resemblance
I've been reading On Becoming a Novelist by John Gardner, something I probably should have done months ago, but hey, better late than never. A specific passage caught my eye this morning and it completely explained why I love reading books by Jonathan Tropper. (Warning - his books are definitely rated "R" - don't want anyone rushing out to read his work, only to be offended by my recommendation.)
The eloquent Mr. Gardner says,
The writer sensitive to language finds his own metaphors, not simply because he has been taught to avoid cliches but because he enjoys finding an exact and vivid metaphor, one never before thought of, so far as he knows.
I found that as my own story came together and the voice shined through the words, I came to appreciate the occasional metaphors - how Hallie would compare things when explaining how she felt. Here's a passage from ILYU -
I pulled one of his t-shirts over my head and made my way to the kitchen, the sunlight pouncing on me like a cat through each window, hunting me down to chide at my alcoholic indiscretion the night before.
How many of you enjoy using metaphors? Do you find them hard to write, or do they come easily? I thought I'd give people the opportunity to share lines from their WiPs, so if you'd like to, feel free to do so in the comments section.
Also, speaking of works in progress, Suzette Saxton and Bethany Wiggins over at Shooting Stars have a contest going on until the 28th of this month. The winner receives two first-five page critiques from none other than Suzette and Bethany themselves! So if you'd like two more pair of eyes to check out your work and give you feedback, head on over there and enter the contest!
Happy Monday!
